Preparing an Oral Proposal Presentation

It’s tempting to prepare orals like a speech. Treat them as another volume of the proposal, with its own instructions, a time limit and a record.

It’s tempting to prepare orals like a speech. Treat them as another volume of the proposal, with its own instructions, a time limit and a record.

Cover illustration for Preparing an Oral Proposal Presentation, from the Closewell Studio blog on sales proposal design
How-to

An oral proposal presentation is when your team presents part of a bid out loud to the people evaluating it, usually with questions afterward. Federal agencies use them under the FAR, and commercial buyers run a version when they bring finalists in. Prepare it as another volume of the proposal. It has instructions, a time limit and a record, and everything you say has to agree with what you’ve already put in writing. Most guides stop at slides and rehearsal. Our read is that the bigger risk is saying something in the room that the document doesn’t back up.

What the rules say about oral presentations

On federal work, start with FAR 15.102. It says orals can replace or add to written information, and that they’re held to the same restrictions on timing and content as written material. Five parts of it change how you should prepare.

  • Some things stay on paper. Representations and certifications go in as the FAR requires, and the signed offer sheet, including any exceptions to terms, goes in writing.
  • The solicitation sets the rules. It has to give you enough to prepare, and it may spell out the evaluation factors, the qualifications presenters need, what written material you can use, the time limit and whether discussions are allowed.
  • There’s a record. The contracting officer keeps a record of what the government relied on. It can be video, audio, notes or copies of your slides, and you may be given a copy.
  • Promises have to be written down. If something you say is meant to be a material contract term, it has to go in writing. Oral statements can’t be incorporated by reference.
  • A recording doesn’t count. A pre-recorded video with no live exchange isn’t an oral presentation under this section, though it may be included in a submission when appropriate.

The FAR is also being rewritten. The overhaul text on acquisition.gov moves orals to 15.105-1 and the record to 15.202, in much shorter language, and it keeps both the record and the writing rule. Which version applies depends on your agency, so read the solicitation first.

Read the instructions like a second Section L

NITAAC, part of the National Institutes of Health, published a guide to orals with sample solicitation language from one of its contracting officers. It’s a useful look at how the other side sets this up. Yours will differ, but here’s what the sample asks for.

  • Teams can bring up to nine attendees, and they’re encouraged to have only proposed personnel deliver the presentation.
  • Presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.
  • Nobody in the room can use a phone or other device to reach the firm for input.
  • Presentations may be recorded, and they may be held virtually.

The sample schedule shows how the morning runs.

ActivityTime allowed
SetupUp to 30 minutes
Welcome and process overview from the contracting officer5 to 10 minutes
Oral presentation1 hour
Break15 minutes
Technical demonstration of key topics1 hour
Break, while the government works out what it needs clarified45 minutes
Questions and answers45 minutes

Look at that second break. The evaluators spend 45 minutes deciding what they still need to hear from you, and your questions come out of that. The rule on slides matters too. If your slides are locked at submission, your last edit happens long before you walk in.

Build the time from the score

Start with the evaluation factors, then hand out minutes by weight. Here’s an example. Say the solicitation gives you 60 minutes and scores four topics at 40, 30, 20 and 10 points. Keep 10 minutes back for slips and handoffs, and the other 50 split 20, 15, 10 and 5. That can feel wrong the first time, because the topic your team loves talking about usually isn’t the one worth 40.

Write each section the same way. Say the point, back it with one piece of evidence and say what it means for this buyer. The NITAAC guide makes the same point about that last step. Its sample debrief notes that competitors spend time on how an approach worked somewhere else, and it suggests ending with what that means in this agency’s environment. It also suggests going light on past accolades, because orals are the time to talk about the government’s requirement.

Put the right people at the front

Your strongest presenter may be the wrong one if they won’t be on the job. The NITAAC sample encourages using only proposed personnel, and it warns that a later performance assessment may compare who was proposed with who did the work.

Name one person to take incoming questions and hand each to the right teammate. The guide expects teams to run that themselves, and an evaluator can tell when nobody has decided who answers.

Then map the panel before you rehearse. List each evaluator, what they care about, what worries them and what they need to see. We built our free buying committee map for sales deals, and it works for a panel too.

Make it agree with the written response

Build a one-page crosswalk before the first rehearsal. Each row is a claim you plan to say out loud, the number or date attached to it and the page of the written response where it appears. Anything without a page is a new claim. Ask the contracting officer how to handle it, or take it out. Anything that’s changed since you submitted gets the same treatment. A response built from a clean RFP response template makes this easier, because every answer already has a known home.

Two of our concepts show one way to keep this straight. The Sixmile Freight concept keeps a dated log of addenda and panel questions on the response itself, so every panel member sees every answer through the orals. The Pinecount concept does the same, so the version on the panel’s screen is never behind the paper copy in the binder.

Both also say what the team will bring. Sixmile offers to walk any lane on the map the panel picks, and Pinecount offers to run the buyer’s worst morning live. That’s a good test for any orals plan, as long as the instructions allow it. What can you do in the room that a document can’t?

Rehearse the questions

Slides get the rehearsal time because they’re easy to practice. The questions are where a bad answer ends up on the record. Build your list from every partial answer and exception in your compliance matrix, every number a finance reader would check, your thinnest past performance and whatever came up in the buyer’s Q&A rounds. Have someone who hasn’t read the bid ask them. Run the whole thing against a clock, with the real handoffs.

When a commercial buyer calls you in

There’s no FAR here, so you have to ask. Who’ll be in the room? How long do we have? What have they read? Can we send anything ahead? What happens after this meeting?

The same thinking applies. Minutes follow what the buyer cares about, the people on the job do the talking and nothing you say should contradict the proposal. Our post on the board presentation covers the version of this that happens higher up.

Plan for the people who weren’t there. Someone in finance or legal may read the proposal afterward without ever hearing the presentation, which is the case for a proposal built for the whole committee. Our RFP response builds pair a portal-ready PDF with a live version for the people who decide, which your team can also use to walk a panel through the plan when the instructions allow it. We update both when the buyer sends questions after submission.

Questions we hear about oral proposal presentations

Are oral presentations scored?

That depends on the solicitation. It should tell you what to present orally and how it’ll be evaluated. On federal work that uses the uniform contract format, look in Section L for instructions and Section M for evaluation factors.

Can we change our slides after we submit them?

Follow the solicitation. In NITAAC’s sample language, presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.

Should the CEO present?

Only if the CEO will be involved in the work or the instructions call for it. A short opening is fine. Evaluators want to hear from the people they’d be working with.

What if we get a question we can’t answer?

Say so, and say how you’ll get the answer. A guess can end up in the record. Check whether the rules allow a written follow-up before you promise one.

The short version

Prepare an oral proposal presentation as one more volume of the bid. Read the instructions first, spend the minutes where the points are, put the people doing the work at the front, check every claim against the written response and spend your rehearsals on the questions.

If you’re holding an RFP with orals in it, send us the RFP. You can see what a Board build includes on the pricing page.

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How-to

An oral proposal presentation is when your team presents part of a bid out loud to the people evaluating it, usually with questions afterward. Federal agencies use them under the FAR, and commercial buyers run a version when they bring finalists in. Prepare it as another volume of the proposal. It has instructions, a time limit and a record, and everything you say has to agree with what you’ve already put in writing. Most guides stop at slides and rehearsal. Our read is that the bigger risk is saying something in the room that the document doesn’t back up.

What the rules say about oral presentations

On federal work, start with FAR 15.102. It says orals can replace or add to written information, and that they’re held to the same restrictions on timing and content as written material. Five parts of it change how you should prepare.

  • Some things stay on paper. Representations and certifications go in as the FAR requires, and the signed offer sheet, including any exceptions to terms, goes in writing.
  • The solicitation sets the rules. It has to give you enough to prepare, and it may spell out the evaluation factors, the qualifications presenters need, what written material you can use, the time limit and whether discussions are allowed.
  • There’s a record. The contracting officer keeps a record of what the government relied on. It can be video, audio, notes or copies of your slides, and you may be given a copy.
  • Promises have to be written down. If something you say is meant to be a material contract term, it has to go in writing. Oral statements can’t be incorporated by reference.
  • A recording doesn’t count. A pre-recorded video with no live exchange isn’t an oral presentation under this section, though it may be included in a submission when appropriate.

The FAR is also being rewritten. The overhaul text on acquisition.gov moves orals to 15.105-1 and the record to 15.202, in much shorter language, and it keeps both the record and the writing rule. Which version applies depends on your agency, so read the solicitation first.

Read the instructions like a second Section L

NITAAC, part of the National Institutes of Health, published a guide to orals with sample solicitation language from one of its contracting officers. It’s a useful look at how the other side sets this up. Yours will differ, but here’s what the sample asks for.

  • Teams can bring up to nine attendees, and they’re encouraged to have only proposed personnel deliver the presentation.
  • Presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.
  • Nobody in the room can use a phone or other device to reach the firm for input.
  • Presentations may be recorded, and they may be held virtually.

The sample schedule shows how the morning runs.

ActivityTime allowed
SetupUp to 30 minutes
Welcome and process overview from the contracting officer5 to 10 minutes
Oral presentation1 hour
Break15 minutes
Technical demonstration of key topics1 hour
Break, while the government works out what it needs clarified45 minutes
Questions and answers45 minutes

Look at that second break. The evaluators spend 45 minutes deciding what they still need to hear from you, and your questions come out of that. The rule on slides matters too. If your slides are locked at submission, your last edit happens long before you walk in.

Build the time from the score

Start with the evaluation factors, then hand out minutes by weight. Here’s an example. Say the solicitation gives you 60 minutes and scores four topics at 40, 30, 20 and 10 points. Keep 10 minutes back for slips and handoffs, and the other 50 split 20, 15, 10 and 5. That can feel wrong the first time, because the topic your team loves talking about usually isn’t the one worth 40.

Write each section the same way. Say the point, back it with one piece of evidence and say what it means for this buyer. The NITAAC guide makes the same point about that last step. Its sample debrief notes that competitors spend time on how an approach worked somewhere else, and it suggests ending with what that means in this agency’s environment. It also suggests going light on past accolades, because orals are the time to talk about the government’s requirement.

Put the right people at the front

Your strongest presenter may be the wrong one if they won’t be on the job. The NITAAC sample encourages using only proposed personnel, and it warns that a later performance assessment may compare who was proposed with who did the work.

Name one person to take incoming questions and hand each to the right teammate. The guide expects teams to run that themselves, and an evaluator can tell when nobody has decided who answers.

Then map the panel before you rehearse. List each evaluator, what they care about, what worries them and what they need to see. We built our free buying committee map for sales deals, and it works for a panel too.

Make it agree with the written response

Build a one-page crosswalk before the first rehearsal. Each row is a claim you plan to say out loud, the number or date attached to it and the page of the written response where it appears. Anything without a page is a new claim. Ask the contracting officer how to handle it, or take it out. Anything that’s changed since you submitted gets the same treatment. A response built from a clean RFP response template makes this easier, because every answer already has a known home.

Two of our concepts show one way to keep this straight. The Sixmile Freight concept keeps a dated log of addenda and panel questions on the response itself, so every panel member sees every answer through the orals. The Pinecount concept does the same, so the version on the panel’s screen is never behind the paper copy in the binder.

Both also say what the team will bring. Sixmile offers to walk any lane on the map the panel picks, and Pinecount offers to run the buyer’s worst morning live. That’s a good test for any orals plan, as long as the instructions allow it. What can you do in the room that a document can’t?

Rehearse the questions

Slides get the rehearsal time because they’re easy to practice. The questions are where a bad answer ends up on the record. Build your list from every partial answer and exception in your compliance matrix, every number a finance reader would check, your thinnest past performance and whatever came up in the buyer’s Q&A rounds. Have someone who hasn’t read the bid ask them. Run the whole thing against a clock, with the real handoffs.

When a commercial buyer calls you in

There’s no FAR here, so you have to ask. Who’ll be in the room? How long do we have? What have they read? Can we send anything ahead? What happens after this meeting?

The same thinking applies. Minutes follow what the buyer cares about, the people on the job do the talking and nothing you say should contradict the proposal. Our post on the board presentation covers the version of this that happens higher up.

Plan for the people who weren’t there. Someone in finance or legal may read the proposal afterward without ever hearing the presentation, which is the case for a proposal built for the whole committee. Our RFP response builds pair a portal-ready PDF with a live version for the people who decide, which your team can also use to walk a panel through the plan when the instructions allow it. We update both when the buyer sends questions after submission.

Questions we hear about oral proposal presentations

Are oral presentations scored?

That depends on the solicitation. It should tell you what to present orally and how it’ll be evaluated. On federal work that uses the uniform contract format, look in Section L for instructions and Section M for evaluation factors.

Can we change our slides after we submit them?

Follow the solicitation. In NITAAC’s sample language, presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.

Should the CEO present?

Only if the CEO will be involved in the work or the instructions call for it. A short opening is fine. Evaluators want to hear from the people they’d be working with.

What if we get a question we can’t answer?

Say so, and say how you’ll get the answer. A guess can end up in the record. Check whether the rules allow a written follow-up before you promise one.

The short version

Prepare an oral proposal presentation as one more volume of the bid. Read the instructions first, spend the minutes where the points are, put the people doing the work at the front, check every claim against the written response and spend your rehearsals on the questions.

If you’re holding an RFP with orals in it, send us the RFP. You can see what a Board build includes on the pricing page.

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An oral proposal presentation is when your team presents part of a bid out loud to the people evaluating it, usually with questions afterward. Federal agencies use them under the FAR, and commercial buyers run a version when they bring finalists in. Prepare it as another volume of the proposal. It has instructions, a time limit and a record, and everything you say has to agree with what you’ve already put in writing. Most guides stop at slides and rehearsal. Our read is that the bigger risk is saying something in the room that the document doesn’t back up.

What the rules say about oral presentations

On federal work, start with FAR 15.102. It says orals can replace or add to written information, and that they’re held to the same restrictions on timing and content as written material. Five parts of it change how you should prepare.

  • Some things stay on paper. Representations and certifications go in as the FAR requires, and the signed offer sheet, including any exceptions to terms, goes in writing.
  • The solicitation sets the rules. It has to give you enough to prepare, and it may spell out the evaluation factors, the qualifications presenters need, what written material you can use, the time limit and whether discussions are allowed.
  • There’s a record. The contracting officer keeps a record of what the government relied on. It can be video, audio, notes or copies of your slides, and you may be given a copy.
  • Promises have to be written down. If something you say is meant to be a material contract term, it has to go in writing. Oral statements can’t be incorporated by reference.
  • A recording doesn’t count. A pre-recorded video with no live exchange isn’t an oral presentation under this section, though it may be included in a submission when appropriate.

The FAR is also being rewritten. The overhaul text on acquisition.gov moves orals to 15.105-1 and the record to 15.202, in much shorter language, and it keeps both the record and the writing rule. Which version applies depends on your agency, so read the solicitation first.

Read the instructions like a second Section L

NITAAC, part of the National Institutes of Health, published a guide to orals with sample solicitation language from one of its contracting officers. It’s a useful look at how the other side sets this up. Yours will differ, but here’s what the sample asks for.

  • Teams can bring up to nine attendees, and they’re encouraged to have only proposed personnel deliver the presentation.
  • Presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.
  • Nobody in the room can use a phone or other device to reach the firm for input.
  • Presentations may be recorded, and they may be held virtually.

The sample schedule shows how the morning runs.

ActivityTime allowed
SetupUp to 30 minutes
Welcome and process overview from the contracting officer5 to 10 minutes
Oral presentation1 hour
Break15 minutes
Technical demonstration of key topics1 hour
Break, while the government works out what it needs clarified45 minutes
Questions and answers45 minutes

Look at that second break. The evaluators spend 45 minutes deciding what they still need to hear from you, and your questions come out of that. The rule on slides matters too. If your slides are locked at submission, your last edit happens long before you walk in.

Build the time from the score

Start with the evaluation factors, then hand out minutes by weight. Here’s an example. Say the solicitation gives you 60 minutes and scores four topics at 40, 30, 20 and 10 points. Keep 10 minutes back for slips and handoffs, and the other 50 split 20, 15, 10 and 5. That can feel wrong the first time, because the topic your team loves talking about usually isn’t the one worth 40.

Write each section the same way. Say the point, back it with one piece of evidence and say what it means for this buyer. The NITAAC guide makes the same point about that last step. Its sample debrief notes that competitors spend time on how an approach worked somewhere else, and it suggests ending with what that means in this agency’s environment. It also suggests going light on past accolades, because orals are the time to talk about the government’s requirement.

Put the right people at the front

Your strongest presenter may be the wrong one if they won’t be on the job. The NITAAC sample encourages using only proposed personnel, and it warns that a later performance assessment may compare who was proposed with who did the work.

Name one person to take incoming questions and hand each to the right teammate. The guide expects teams to run that themselves, and an evaluator can tell when nobody has decided who answers.

Then map the panel before you rehearse. List each evaluator, what they care about, what worries them and what they need to see. We built our free buying committee map for sales deals, and it works for a panel too.

Make it agree with the written response

Build a one-page crosswalk before the first rehearsal. Each row is a claim you plan to say out loud, the number or date attached to it and the page of the written response where it appears. Anything without a page is a new claim. Ask the contracting officer how to handle it, or take it out. Anything that’s changed since you submitted gets the same treatment. A response built from a clean RFP response template makes this easier, because every answer already has a known home.

Two of our concepts show one way to keep this straight. The Sixmile Freight concept keeps a dated log of addenda and panel questions on the response itself, so every panel member sees every answer through the orals. The Pinecount concept does the same, so the version on the panel’s screen is never behind the paper copy in the binder.

Both also say what the team will bring. Sixmile offers to walk any lane on the map the panel picks, and Pinecount offers to run the buyer’s worst morning live. That’s a good test for any orals plan, as long as the instructions allow it. What can you do in the room that a document can’t?

Rehearse the questions

Slides get the rehearsal time because they’re easy to practice. The questions are where a bad answer ends up on the record. Build your list from every partial answer and exception in your compliance matrix, every number a finance reader would check, your thinnest past performance and whatever came up in the buyer’s Q&A rounds. Have someone who hasn’t read the bid ask them. Run the whole thing against a clock, with the real handoffs.

When a commercial buyer calls you in

There’s no FAR here, so you have to ask. Who’ll be in the room? How long do we have? What have they read? Can we send anything ahead? What happens after this meeting?

The same thinking applies. Minutes follow what the buyer cares about, the people on the job do the talking and nothing you say should contradict the proposal. Our post on the board presentation covers the version of this that happens higher up.

Plan for the people who weren’t there. Someone in finance or legal may read the proposal afterward without ever hearing the presentation, which is the case for a proposal built for the whole committee. Our RFP response builds pair a portal-ready PDF with a live version for the people who decide, which your team can also use to walk a panel through the plan when the instructions allow it. We update both when the buyer sends questions after submission.

Questions we hear about oral proposal presentations

Are oral presentations scored?

That depends on the solicitation. It should tell you what to present orally and how it’ll be evaluated. On federal work that uses the uniform contract format, look in Section L for instructions and Section M for evaluation factors.

Can we change our slides after we submit them?

Follow the solicitation. In NITAAC’s sample language, presenters use the exact presentation they submitted, and a substitution may disqualify them.

Should the CEO present?

Only if the CEO will be involved in the work or the instructions call for it. A short opening is fine. Evaluators want to hear from the people they’d be working with.

What if we get a question we can’t answer?

Say so, and say how you’ll get the answer. A guess can end up in the record. Check whether the rules allow a written follow-up before you promise one.

The short version

Prepare an oral proposal presentation as one more volume of the bid. Read the instructions first, spend the minutes where the points are, put the people doing the work at the front, check every claim against the written response and spend your rehearsals on the questions.

If you’re holding an RFP with orals in it, send us the RFP. You can see what a Board build includes on the pricing page.

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